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This is a fun game but... ugh i dunno. It would be a LOT better if the player had a bit more control over who to persue. Like, right now the redhead tried to make out with mc, i had mc knock it off cuz for my first playthrough i wanted to focus on goth chick, goth chick and redhead had a big argument earlier an mc found out that goth chick made out with redheads crush. So, as payback redhead pulls mc into a room and starts making out with him. When he stops it she cries and runs off. Gee, i wonder why.... (mc is incredibly thick not to figure that one out. Not exactly top marks in college smart.) At this point were forced to follow redhead. But thats stupid. Shes a bitch, fuck her. I wanna go do other shit and ignore her. But there is no option to do that. And since i have 0 investment in redhead the whole thing feels like a chore. 

Repeat for the whole scavenger hunt. We get the big blowout argument and, instead of getting some form of closure we get a stupid scavenger hunt where mc doesn't even get to chose whichever girl he wants to team up with. 

I hate  being rude, and i dont mean to sound it. I really enjoyed everything i played to and including that blowout fight. Dialogue is funny, characters are semi realistic and eventho i usually prefer more roaming elements in these games and time sometimes seems to go a bit too fast (as in id like to do more in a day than 1 scene) i think most scenes are between a 7.5/10 and a 9/10. Thats really high marks for me. 

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Some understandable critique, however do keep in mind (from what I've seen on the deleted comments) that the game is a non harem that will slowly start to branch out a bit more. There is many things that I wish to convey to the player and that the player will have to see, both here and in some future episodes. Initially, when I was just starting to write the episode 1, I had huge ideas of making the player have absolute control, but that's completely impossible, especially for a single person working on the game.
Not to mention, one of the biggest complaints is the complete opposite, players disliking that so much content can be missed due to choices and going with one girl instead of the others.
Overall, there is no perfect balance where everyone will be happy, but I'll try to have a balance that I both find best and what most people should be satisfied with. Unfortunately, that balance won't satisfy everyone.

Wait deleted comments arent deleted for you? Well... now im embarrassed. I promise, just a knee-jerk reaction and me trying out The Kraken rum for the first time after being a beer drinker my entire life lol. 


I dont get the "content can be missed" comments, i mean fair play, we all enjoy different things and the world would be a boring place if we all liked the same stuff . I mean imagine a world where everybody was a adam sandler fan. Yikes.  But being able to miss content means there is replay value. You can play it again and have a completely different experience. I value that a lot in a game. Like, last year i bought guardians of the galaxy on PC. great game, awesome score. But, it had a barely functioning newgame+ system so i played it exactly once and that was it. Great game, but it barely registers my awareness of awesome videogames. Mass Effect Legendary Edition on the other hand has nearly 700 played hours on it because of replay value. 

I can see how complete control would be a really big pain in the ass to make. I don't envy the people behind BADIK and CK because of the level of choice they have to carry forward with each game. So i get that its a lot of work and you have to create a lot of different paths. So i understand that isnt really realistic. If i were to boil my "complaint" down it would be that MC is too stupid. Anyone could see from the context of what redhead was trying to do to goth chick by trying to ride him. I mean mc was there during the blowout fight where it was revealed what goth chick did to redhead.

I also chose to ignore redhead's advances (i did have to start the game again when i figured it out when goth chick whispered about not wanting to meet her and having redhead said "say hi to goth chick for me" ) so imo it made 0 sense for mc to follow redhead up to the roof. He should have gone to goth chick since every choice ive had mc make was to follow her path. 


Anyways. enough Karening for one night. You've made a great game so far and i really enjoyed it. Sorry if i came across as rude.
 

Just my two cents but it amazes me that criticism here is better expressed & better recieved than, well, most places.


GJ both of you.

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When will the next update come or episode 4, really great game btw!

Will be quite a while as I am pushing through my last year of university, which is held in a completely different city than where I live.  Best to check progress reports when I make them!

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guys this universe is the same as eternum
there is also another guy called Chang here, who looks the exact same as the guy in eternum
this cannot be just an easter egg, there is no way
therefore eternum (the game) is also in this universe
im not crazy i swear
imnotcrazyimnotcrazyimnotcrazyimnotcrazy

he is even extremely invested in heists
they are the same 
real

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Uh, it's called a collab. Cari and I had a small collab so other persons character appeared. Nothing more to it really ^^

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there is no collab this is a deeper conspiracy 
i am 115% sure that annie is secretly in the background somewhere... i just have to find her
(also this is a great game keep going)

If you ever manage to find Annie, could you please post a screenshot here? Thank you!

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if i find her i will gladly post the screenshot here
have a good day

Well not only Chang but also Michaela his girlfriend.

what a strange name! MichaelA
is there a MichaelB?

Is the game over ? I mean after the Serena hotel top thingie.

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No? You still have the  walk home and next day on uni.

Yeah i mean after that the games over? Or new update is gonna come

Of course there will be future updates, but will take time due to working on this alone and having to deal with my University and exams.

Why i cant enter the game its always getting out when i enter the game 🥺🥺

I don't know what you exactly mean. What platform do you play on? pc/mac/android?

ill play it in Android . I mean when i click New game its aLways get me out Like i cant enter in the Game . Its there something you can advice 

Unfortunately, if Android, not much I can help. It's very fickle. Have you tried other, similar, Renpy games on android? Any issues with others?
And is ep3 your first time playing Fates, or did you play some previous update on Android?

Hi dev pregnancy is planned?

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Not really. Maybe in the very ending, but not as an actual feature during normal play.

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I cannot describe my happiness when I had realized that Chang was in this game. I absolutely love it so far.

Glad you enjoyed it! (hopefully for reasons beside Chang too :D)

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I just have to say that I like how Avis is always posing like Risotto Nero

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The Chang reference! After a solid hour of thinking to myself that MC looks kinda Change-y lmao top tier 

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😁😁
Although I always say to Cari: I was first (insert run emoji)

Is there a guide/walkthrough somewhere?

Yes, there is!
There is both a walkthrough mod that you copy paste in your files (doesnt work for android) and a pdf file for some details about how to get some gallery items.
Do note, previous saves currently don't work with wt mod, so you'd have to restart in that case.


https://www.patreon.com/posts/walkthrough-for-73049804

Cool, tyvm!!

Just to be sure, episode 3 is an extention to the previous part and i only need to play episode 3 to get everything?

While ep3 is extension of previous (ep2.5) release, due to issues and corruption of save files people are required to start the game from the beginning, as most save files won't load correctly. (still unexplained to this day, probably due to so many small grammar etc. changes and fixes)

Thanks, i was just wondering since i can’t download the firsts episodes and i was worried that i missed some parts

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When is the next update am so excited for the next update

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Will be a while!
I am working on this mostly alone, and I am currently very busy as I am trying to finish my last year of uni as much as possible, and game progress is more or less paused during exams.

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Avis is best girl, I will die on this hill. Fantastic work thus far, I'm incredibly into the story and the characters resonate with me so that you feel a genuine connection to them. Looking forward to episode 4!

Glad you had a connection!
Please go right on the next checkout zone to join the big Avis Fanclub crowd 😁

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Is this game ending are we as MC only have 1 girl in the end?? Because Harem is suck in my opinion.

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Yes, this is not a harem, so even though you can for now pursue multiple routes, you will end up with only one girl in the end.

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Yes, not many, but a few. Will be more later on.

I actually need a help rn :P I'm currently missing the last pic of Raiko, Serena and Koko. I played this game many times but still cant find the solution. Can someone help me, please? :,(

Spoiler ahead, because, obviously spoiler:
Raiko: it's episode 2 content, you need to go with her to the park, and then go with her to the swimsuit shop. For all gallery you need some options tryouts and also have tons of relationship points
Koko: you need to go with her in the hotel for the kiss challenge instead of Raiko
Serena: uhhh you need to kiss her on the roof and also have enough relationship points with her

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Thank you for Awesome game. Downloaded this game because liked the Serena design, and after playing, so far she is my favorite girl, scene on the roof with the stars was the best, so beutiful. Also Falazio and Simon remind me how me and my friends used to hang out, in the university: girls, booze and parties. So sometimes it's difficalt to check on girls when you can hang out with buddies, bro code is strong. Looking forward to the continuation of the story. 

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Bro code is strong!
Glad to hear you liked 😁

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Is this a harem game?

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Nope, not a harem!

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This is so good ..keep up the good work

Glad you liked it!

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I love this game and their characters, I can see the inspiration in Caribdis games and it's amazing. I'm between Raiko and Valentina haha

Sorry for this question but I just want to know which program do you use to make the environments? I'm a software developer just finishing university but for a long time I've been wanting to learn how to make AVN but I don't really know where to start. I might learn to model characters in blender but the environments seems like a lot of work.

All the work you do with world building and characters is amazing, I will follow your progress and future projects <3

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Glad you liked!
Honey select 2 was used for creating it.

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Really amazed by this project! Chars are amazing and very beautiful (team Avis and/or Raiko here :P), the plot is intriguing with all these cliffhangers like Levy's, I CAN'T WAIT TO CONTINUE THIS GAME! even if I can't donate, I would like to support this game in some way, maybe an Italian translation?

Hey, glad you had fun with the cliffhanger 😁
Hmmm actually, one of the only unofficial translations that I know of is Italian, so I think that one already exists. Thanks for offer tho!

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Was really fun, had to play it 3 times to make a save for avis raiko and serena

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Ive only played about 10 minutes and already think Avis is perfect

I'll add you to "Avis Fanclub Association" group 😁

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Was scrolling itch last night and came across this, played non stop for around 6 hours before i went to sleep. I haven't really been this hooked since titles like eternum or my bully is my lover. The story is peak, and its refreshing to not have porn going on constantly. makes me feel good, so keep going on this, im excited for whats to come!

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Yaaay, more people joining the slowburn train 🎉
Glad you liked it!

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And thanks for the support on Patreon! <3

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Can't keep this game out of my head.  Love the visuals and love Avis's route :D

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Another Avis fan spotted in the wild!
Glad you liked it ☺

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Hey hey, just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed the game, or at least what's out of it so far! Keep up the good work!

Thank you! I hope you enjoy all that's to come as well ☺

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I never played a game with so much character details, and each character felt so lively like you personally invited them to join the game with their unique personality. Dang I can't wait for the next update!


But take your time since yours still a student so I know it's a lot of pressure to do all this, and making us happy in the way, I hope you do well in your university man and it's worth the wait so take your time 😉

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Glad you enjoyed all the characters! I really tried to make them human and characterized as much as possible, glad it worked!

I hope so to, the faster I finish, the faster I can properly tackle the game.

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Hope episode 4 comes out soon! This is one of (if not) the best visual novels I've ever played. I love the character building and how it doesn't skip to the extreme stuff straight away. Overall an amazing experience I  would definitely recommend!

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It won't be so soon due to me fighting with the last year of university, but I hope it will be worth the wait!
Thank you for the kind praise 😊

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Take all the time you need man. This game is perfect and it will definitely be worth the wait.

when will episode 4 come out?

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Due to my ongoing university, will be a while!

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I just saw the Chang reference, 10/10 I love it

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😁 Everyone seems to have liked it!

Does this game have any lewd scenes such as s*x/f$$k? Not some blow or stuff in this current version?

Or will it be implemented on the next update or more updates?

Only a boobjob and some masturbation so far. 
Naturally, there will be much sex later on, but the game is focused on character building and relationships and not jumping onto adult stuff right away.

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I have a question regarding the party (may include spoilers or not so I'll leave a big space now):












When the party game starts it is said that Koko has to have sex or something like that, but I was focusing more on other characters, anyway... After the test are over and the MC goes back, Koko says something like "I completed all of mine"... Is it implied that she indeed sleep with someone else or am I just dumb and read all wrong? 


Leaving that aside, I loved the game, great characters everywhere, incredibly well made dialogue and lots of funny moments, including the appearing of Chang, I'll keep on playing it cause it's really well made, definitely in my top5 games from this platform.


Keep on the great job!

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Haha, I see what you mean! But nope, if you choose the "I mean..." option  when she sees that challenge, she says no chance, and throughout the party it kind of alludes it being a fake challenge due to Falazio. However I could add an extra line or two at the end of the party with the counting to make it clear, I'll add it next episode.

Glad you enjoyed the game! 

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I've played alot of Adult VNs this is gotta be one of the best one I've played so far. I really love the characters it made me play multiple times just to get to their routes. I really enjoyed this game. Can't wait for the next update. 

Glad you are enjoying the characters and routes! I hope you will enjoy what's in store ^^

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I wanted to let you know that I've played the the game 5 times already. This is my second favorite VN apart from Eternum. I would donate to you but I'm flat broke right now and looking for a new part time job. Once I get one I'll donate right away. Keep up the amazing work! (Serena best girl btw)

Thanks a lot for the high praise! Even being mentioned in the same league as Eternum means a lot 😍
And no worries, worry about yourself first!

So I've seen through the comments that this will not be a harem game, but may I ask why? Is it due to personal reasons, or is it just cause most of these visual novel games are harem games?

Why would there need to be involved personal reasons or going against the tide?

Most games rendered in hs1/2 (like mine) are harem, but if you look at the Daz games (those more lifelike looking) it's the opposite.  I think that as the creator I can portray my game any way I want if it fits my vision, without the need to change my idea just because "people are used to something else".

Thankfully, there seems to be new hs2 non-harem games being developed on the horizon, so this disparity should equalize a bit ^^

Sorry, this is the first game I've seen that was non-harem. I was simply curious, and those were the only two reasons I could think of at the time. Though I probably should have included "or another reason" in my comment.

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You've already mentioned how this isn't going to be a harem game, have you thought about the possibility of some polyamorous routes for characters you think have good chemistry?

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Nope, the game will only feature single girl endings.

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Much appreciated bro...i loved the story so far i was worried harem crap was gonna mess it up 😥

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Shame. I would've liked to at least have the option.

Is this game completed? Or still have some update?

I just didn't realy like cliffhanger end😂

This game is very far from it's ending! 😁

nice im going to play it then

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Why do I do this to myself?
Now I have another AMAZING game that I have to wait on updates for.
I play this to get away from waiting on Eternum, but my boi Chang graces us with his presence.
And holy crap, at first I was a bit put off by not having a harem, but I then remembered I am a normal human male who only wants one girlfriend and then found the dilemma to be choice.
You better stop writing such good characters Katana, I'm going to have to play multiple times when this game is finished.
I am leaning towards Avis, but Serana hit me like a truck with her emotions and side of the story, but I don't quite believe her.
I knew a girl that was similar to Avis, but she was quite... salacious, so I am biased to doubt Avis, even though I don't want to.
Even so, I choose Avis.

Dang Caribidis and his amazing game making inspiring others to make great games grumble grumble...



TL;DR 10/10 game with actually well written characters.

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Oh no, guess I have to stop writing those characters!
Haha, jk. Glad you liked it!

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Loved the Eternum reference with Chang and Micaela, also scared the hell outta me that the MC has the same name as me and his surname ALSO STARTS WITH B

Sussy sus Nathan look. 🤐

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Loved this! 

Not only are there lots of choices, the characters are really endearing!

Also, I love how not every choice involves the girls but the bros too!

Best of lucks with university! 

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We all have a few bros in life too, gotta keep some reality aspects !
Thanks! Will be hard, but I really wish to finish it and be done with my uni journey.

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