My man. After playing it til the last update let me say that your VN is very good. Loved the character. Can't wait for next update. Keep it up the good work!
Will there be a Chinese version later? I read the introduction and pictures, and I think this is a good work, but my poor English prevents me from having a good experience.
Possibly. Currently there are no translations, but if I ever do decide to have some, Chinese will be a high priority due to demand. Keep in mind though it's neither an easy work, nor (usually) is it free. Seems quite a lot of people ask about them without realizing it ^^
Hey friendly suggestion - you may want to add more images to this main page of the game on itch. It's a great avn with a lot of promise, but the single image doesn't do it justice. I think a lot of folks will overlook it assuming that it must be very early into development.
I'll add more for sure! I'm waiting for a certain slow dev (me) to finish with the rework one day and then I'll update the page a bit, will be plenty of good renders to select then ^^
Question. Should I play the current version or wait til you finish reworking? btw can I ask why are you reworking the game? I feel like playing it but I've got this uncertainty haha
Already during my work on Episode 4 release, I realized I was in a tough spot with multiple characters and how they were limited due to how I portrayed them earlier/the content they had, biggest offender being Eiko. What she used to be, and what I tried to make her in ep4 was vastly different. After thinking about that, I sat down and thought of all areas I thought were lacking or being problematic, and that's how it got to me reworking. Essentially, I'm sacrificing my income and viewership/popularity to do this while it's still somewhat "early", so I can have a better product much later down the line.
Got it man. Keep cooking. It's your AVN and you do what is best for your product. But this means if I play prework content I'd have to play it again after rework? I don't mind, I'm just curious.
No, but script is kinda done and now the biggest hurdle aka renders remains. Impossible in less than 3 months, that's at least something I can say. 3-6 sounds reasonable.
Have you finished episode 3 content? (a hotel party + a tiny bit after). MC gets a bit of a visual update after, so it might help you then. He's going to have that look from now onwards ^^
So I just heard a very Disturbing News that this game is Only 1 Girl Only but the Worst part is that I like 3-4.... of the girls than the rest because they are Kind, Lovely and each has different behavior but mostly I like the part of their uniqueness and having no past relationships or sexual drama. The other girls that has experience (or idk) is sexy or I say more hot because they are using their body to show more skin or making it sexual because of those action they are not truly Beautiful in my heart and it doesn't change my perspective on the Real Woman. So It's still not a lost since I the player who will be deciding the outcome of the story. Ohh the Best part of this game is that IT'S SO LONG which I like the most since I haven't had any story like this for such a long time without the sexual thing happening hahahaha. Very very disturbing news🗿🗿🗿.... I finished all the parts of the game btw so I am now just waiting.
Didn't see or know or I just forgot about it hahahaha but After finishing the game that's where I realized it and when I check the comments section here that's where it confirmed it but to be fair the game background Totally looks like a Harem game.
i like multiple as well but even with this kind you can restart and have him pickup a different girl i did that with another story wonder when 0.5 is coming out
Whats hard is picking the right girl...i mean there are a few i care about last i plaid...some are slower then others...but how can i pick? Thats the problem with none heram games is the fact that lets say 5 girls love you but you are forced to pick 1...if one has the option he should always strive for more...i would never pick 1 over 4....i plaid games that gave you a choice...stay with heram or leave them and date one chick...like heck nah fam thats just dumb...I wanted to play this again but I remembered it's none heram...and frankly I don't wanna hurt the girls I care about...in this game...it will happen and yeah idk
So I know you said this is a one girl only, which is fine, little sad my dream throuple will never work(I really wish there was one). But is there a possible chance that a one off threesome can be in the cards for them since it looks like throuple is out of the cards. (Avis & Serena)
Hey, just wanna say that ur game is super well made with bunch of extremely beautiful girls..... In short, totally love it.
Bt there's one big problem, and that is this waiting period is way too long..... It's been what.. nearly 2 years with no update.... Dev we r dying here for ur update..... Pls give us some updates.
There are hundreds of games with poorly made characters in which you basically have relationships with everyone, even your own mother. And in this one, in which all the characters are extremely well made, you have no relationship with anyone, it's almost ironic!!!! What's so hard about letting us hammer one of these girls?
I mean, you answered your own question. This game isn't like most out there where you bang a girl because you simply walked by her. There is even a warning ingame that the game is a slowburn. If that's not your thing, that's fine, there is plenty of such games ^^
This game made me happy. This game got me invested. I love the story and the characters. Thanks for this masterpiece. I know it's not done yet, but it's so good, though.
I am writing this comment with utmost reverence. Nowadays, quite a few creators are solely intent on敷衍sponsors and are eager to make money effortlessly. In such an environment, it is truly astonishing that there is someone who spares no effort to remake the game in order to ensure the coherence of the game's plot. This kind of dedication and responsibility towards the work is indeed invaluable. This game is truly a masterpiece and holds a supreme position in my heart. Its script is exquisitely crafted, with a plot full of twists and turns and rigorous logic. Every detail is handled to perfection, drawing players deep into the game. The character portrayals are vivid and well-rounded. Each character has a unique charisma and growth trajectory, leaving a lasting impression on players. The rendering effect is even more stunning. The delicate and realistic picture quality creates an immersive gaming atmosphere, making players feel as if they are right in the game world. It has been several months since I played Episode 4, yet those wonderful plots and vivid characters still linger in my mind. Moreover, I sincerely hope that a Chinese version can be added to the game, and AI technology can be employed to polish the text, so that more Chinese players can experience the unique charm of this game. I noticed the mention of Episode 4.5 in your article, and the version I am currently playing is 0.4. At the end of this version, Ekio is sitting alone on the ground, drinking to drown his sorrows. I wonder if the version I am playing is the latest one. I sincerely hope to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yes the Episode 4 that you played is the current last version. Ep4.5 (rework) will advance the story in some areas, but probably not enough to call it Episode 5 (hence why it's named ep4.5). I'm not going to use AI for any translations, if I do add translations it's going to be properly made by a person ^^
First and foremost, I'm extremely grateful that you've spared the time to respond despite your hectic schedule. I've delved into numerous games featuring shoddy AI translations. Initially, I didn't perceive any issues since those games generally lacked engaging storylines worth perusing attentively. That all changed, however, when I played your game. Upon going through your articles and some of the comments you've replied to, I was astounded by the game's ingenious design. Each choice holds the potential to impact character favorability and subsequent plot progression. Regrettably, due to subpar machine translations, certain sentences became rather convoluted and difficult to fathom. As a result, I had no alternative but to switch to the English version and rely on translation tools, along with my modest English proficiency, to navigate the game. I found myself constantly ruminating over sentences, attempting to decipher their true meanings. Nonetheless, I remain thoroughly captivated by the game's immersive narrative experience. The reason I brought up the use of artificial intelligence is that I've played several games where AI was employed to refine and polish sentences post - machine translation. In my view, this approach falls within an acceptable range for many players. Even though some sentences may seem a bit stilted, they don't impede comprehension. Given that you've mentioned your recent financial hardships, I believe this could be a viable solution (naturally, it's not obligatory. It would be wonderful if it can be implemented. I'm truly enamored with this game).
As it's a non-harem game, will the other LIs still remain close friends with the MC even after you're on a specific route? Because a mistake I think many AVNs like this do is make the other LIs treat the MC basically like a stranger if you're not on their path. Which kinda becomes a disservice to the characters.
Yes! That's one of things I'm trying to improve on with the current reworking as well. At the moment, you can say Mc is friendly (and doesn't seem to be a reason not to continue) with Avis/Koko/Raiko, but much less so (depending on choices also) with Serena, Levy, Valentina and Eiko. It was a bit unclear from my own previous writing, but it should be showcased a bit better in rework. So yes, MC will be friendly with all of the girls throughout the game and continue interacting with them, and some choices/pathing will be slightly shrunk to better portray it (like removing not tripping thief which locked you out of any meaningful Levy talk for 2 updates).
You have to do your best to showcase you are available and partially ignore Koko. If not enough of a hinting, read following guide:
Enter Normal -> Jump in with your story -> Correct her and say you're not in a relationship -> Let the reason linger -> Glance at Soo-ah -> ask Soo-Ah -> Ignore it and go to Soo-Ah
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My man. After playing it til the last update let me say that your VN is very good. Loved the character. Can't wait for next update. Keep it up the good work!
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After think about the story so far. I can tell you : one thing. I hate Serena.
Especially because i've met some girls like her, who have this kind of behavior.
But she's the best girl....
I don't know what do you like with her, but I can understand your opinion
Is Eiko supposed to be pronounced like Hi or like Hey in the first syllable?
More towards Hey was my initial goal ^^
When is the next update?
I love Avis! Can't wait for the next episodes!
How to get the Chinese version
It doesn't exist in chinese yet.
Will there be a Chinese version later? I read the introduction and pictures, and I think this is a good work, but my poor English prevents me from having a good experience.
Possibly. Currently there are no translations, but if I ever do decide to have some, Chinese will be a high priority due to demand.
Keep in mind though it's neither an easy work, nor (usually) is it free. Seems quite a lot of people ask about them without realizing it ^^
This is good news. I will continue to pay attention to your work. I also wish you a happy life.
As a Chinese player, I also need Chinese voice and I am very much looking forward to it
Hey friendly suggestion - you may want to add more images to this main page of the game on itch. It's a great avn with a lot of promise, but the single image doesn't do it justice. I think a lot of folks will overlook it assuming that it must be very early into development.
I'll add more for sure! I'm waiting for a certain slow dev (me) to finish with the rework one day and then I'll update the page a bit, will be plenty of good renders to select then ^^
Question. Should I play the current version or wait til you finish reworking? btw can I ask why are you reworking the game? I feel like playing it but I've got this uncertainty haha
As there is still some time till rework is done (as I just said to the person below, 3 months at the very minimum) I'd suggest to play anyway.
This post here (it's public/free post) explains a lot on why it's reworking time:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/progress-report-103137187
(Just skip to around halfway through the text)
Already during my work on Episode 4 release, I realized I was in a tough spot with multiple characters and how they were limited due to how I portrayed them earlier/the content they had, biggest offender being Eiko. What she used to be, and what I tried to make her in ep4 was vastly different. After thinking about that, I sat down and thought of all areas I thought were lacking or being problematic, and that's how it got to me reworking. Essentially, I'm sacrificing my income and viewership/popularity to do this while it's still somewhat "early", so I can have a better product much later down the line.
Got it man. Keep cooking. It's your AVN and you do what is best for your product. But this means if I play prework content I'd have to play it again after rework? I don't mind, I'm just curious.
Yep, naturally the changes are big enough that even if someone wanted to "ignore" the errors, the saves wouldn't/shouldn't work ^
is there any eta for the new update?
No, but script is kinda done and now the biggest hurdle aka renders remains. Impossible in less than 3 months, that's at least something I can say. 3-6 sounds reasonable.
I'm 3~4 hours in, and pretty invested so far, but my main gripe is that the MC has kinda of a goofy face which can be distracting sometimes
Have you finished episode 3 content? (a hotel party + a tiny bit after).
MC gets a bit of a visual update after, so it might help you then. He's going to have that look from now onwards ^^
What happen to this game?
Being worked on (rework) ^^
Phew I thought it is abandoned like other games keep us updated about the game katanaVN.
Please have Indonesian translate
a non-harem AVN ? let's fucking go!!!
It's a very good game, when will more chapters come out?
So I just heard a very Disturbing News that this game is Only 1 Girl Only but the Worst part is that I like 3-4.... of the girls than the rest because they are Kind, Lovely and each has different behavior but mostly I like the part of their uniqueness and having no past relationships or sexual drama. The other girls that has experience (or idk) is sexy or I say more hot because they are using their body to show more skin or making it sexual because of those action they are not truly Beautiful in my heart and it doesn't change my perspective on the Real Woman. So It's still not a lost since I the player who will be deciding the outcome of the story. Ohh the Best part of this game is that IT'S SO LONG which I like the most since I haven't had any story like this for such a long time without the sexual thing happening hahahaha. Very very disturbing news🗿🗿🗿.... I finished all the parts of the game btw so I am now just waiting.
I totally Agree with you that this is a Disturbance News.
So u r saying that this game isn't a Harem game??...... Bt it seems like one tho. R u sure??
Yes bro I thought that too hahaha
Of course it's not, it even says in the intro when you start the game.
Didn't see or know or I just forgot about it hahahaha but After finishing the game that's where I realized it and when I check the comments section here that's where it confirmed it but to be fair the game background Totally looks like a Harem game.
Really sorry dev.... Didn't see or didn't remember. That's a big let down tho... Bt the story is awesome so it's kinda make up for it ig.😅
i like multiple as well but even with this kind you can restart and have him pickup a different girl i did that with another story wonder when 0.5 is coming out
Whats hard is picking the right girl...i mean there are a few i care about last i plaid...some are slower then others...but how can i pick? Thats the problem with none heram games is the fact that lets say 5 girls love you but you are forced to pick 1...if one has the option he should always strive for more...i would never pick 1 over 4....i plaid games that gave you a choice...stay with heram or leave them and date one chick...like heck nah fam thats just dumb...I wanted to play this again but I remembered it's none heram...and frankly I don't wanna hurt the girls I care about...in this game...it will happen and yeah idk
So I know you said this is a one girl only, which is fine, little sad my dream throuple will never work(I really wish there was one). But is there a possible chance that a one off threesome can be in the cards for them since it looks like throuple is out of the cards. (Avis & Serena)
No updates since 20 November, 2023. Is it coming to Steam, perhaps?
Nope, no steam releases for this
Wait wait that long? Without an update well considering the Graphics or arts it's worth i.
Hey, just wanna say that ur game is super well made with bunch of extremely beautiful girls..... In short, totally love it.
Bt there's one big problem, and that is this waiting period is way too long..... It's been what.. nearly 2 years with no update.... Dev we r dying here for ur update..... Pls give us some updates.
I'm dying too (dev) 🤣🤣
🤦🏻♂️😂
I thought the last update was 2024 so Damn mate
No it's actually 2023 november 18
Next update 👀
There are hundreds of games with poorly made characters in which you basically have relationships with everyone, even your own mother. And in this one, in which all the characters are extremely well made, you have no relationship with anyone, it's almost ironic!!!!
What's so hard about letting us hammer one of these girls?
I mean, you answered your own question. This game isn't like most out there where you bang a girl because you simply walked by her. There is even a warning ingame that the game is a slowburn.
If that's not your thing, that's fine, there is plenty of such games ^^
This game made me happy. This game got me invested. I love the story and the characters. Thanks for this masterpiece. I know it's not done yet, but it's so good, though.
Glad you enjoyed!
When I changed my phone I couldn't save the save files and I've been looking for this game for almost a week finally I find it😭
I am writing this comment with utmost reverence. Nowadays, quite a few creators are solely intent on敷衍sponsors and are eager to make money effortlessly. In such an environment, it is truly astonishing that there is someone who spares no effort to remake the game in order to ensure the coherence of the game's plot. This kind of dedication and responsibility towards the work is indeed invaluable. This game is truly a masterpiece and holds a supreme position in my heart. Its script is exquisitely crafted, with a plot full of twists and turns and rigorous logic. Every detail is handled to perfection, drawing players deep into the game. The character portrayals are vivid and well-rounded. Each character has a unique charisma and growth trajectory, leaving a lasting impression on players. The rendering effect is even more stunning. The delicate and realistic picture quality creates an immersive gaming atmosphere, making players feel as if they are right in the game world. It has been several months since I played Episode 4, yet those wonderful plots and vivid characters still linger in my mind. Moreover, I sincerely hope that a Chinese version can be added to the game, and AI technology can be employed to polish the text, so that more Chinese players can experience the unique charm of this game. I noticed the mention of Episode 4.5 in your article, and the version I am currently playing is 0.4. At the end of this version, Ekio is sitting alone on the ground, drinking to drown his sorrows. I wonder if the version I am playing is the latest one. I sincerely hope to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yes the Episode 4 that you played is the current last version.
Ep4.5 (rework) will advance the story in some areas, but probably not enough to call it Episode 5 (hence why it's named ep4.5).
I'm not going to use AI for any translations, if I do add translations it's going to be properly made by a person ^^
First and foremost, I'm extremely grateful that you've spared the time to respond despite your hectic schedule. I've delved into numerous games featuring shoddy AI translations. Initially, I didn't perceive any issues since those games generally lacked engaging storylines worth perusing attentively. That all changed, however, when I played your game. Upon going through your articles and some of the comments you've replied to, I was astounded by the game's ingenious design. Each choice holds the potential to impact character favorability and subsequent plot progression. Regrettably, due to subpar machine translations, certain sentences became rather convoluted and difficult to fathom. As a result, I had no alternative but to switch to the English version and rely on translation tools, along with my modest English proficiency, to navigate the game. I found myself constantly ruminating over sentences, attempting to decipher their true meanings. Nonetheless, I remain thoroughly captivated by the game's immersive narrative experience. The reason I brought up the use of artificial intelligence is that I've played several games where AI was employed to refine and polish sentences post - machine translation. In my view, this approach falls within an acceptable range for many players. Even though some sentences may seem a bit stilted, they don't impede comprehension. Given that you've mentioned your recent financial hardships, I believe this could be a viable solution (naturally, it's not obligatory. It would be wonderful if it can be implemented. I'm truly enamored with this game).
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really good game i say , also Avis is very cute
I want you can add Chinese.It's very hard to translate.Please
As it's a non-harem game, will the other LIs still remain close friends with the MC even after you're on a specific route? Because a mistake I think many AVNs like this do is make the other LIs treat the MC basically like a stranger if you're not on their path. Which kinda becomes a disservice to the characters.
Yes!
That's one of things I'm trying to improve on with the current reworking as well. At the moment, you can say Mc is friendly (and doesn't seem to be a reason not to continue) with Avis/Koko/Raiko, but much less so (depending on choices also) with Serena, Levy, Valentina and Eiko. It was a bit unclear from my own previous writing, but it should be showcased a bit better in rework.
So yes, MC will be friendly with all of the girls throughout the game and continue interacting with them, and some choices/pathing will be slightly shrunk to better portray it (like removing not tripping thief which locked you out of any meaningful Levy talk for 2 updates).
Can't figure out how to get that Soo-Ah scene.
You have to do your best to showcase you are available and partially ignore Koko.
If not enough of a hinting, read following guide:
Enter Normal -> Jump in with your story -> Correct her and say you're not in a relationship -> Let the reason linger -> Glance at Soo-ah -> ask Soo-Ah -> Ignore it and go to Soo-Ah